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Building An Empirically-Based Model of Efl Learners’ Writing Processes

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New Directions for Research in L2 Writing

Part of the book series: Studies in Writing ((STUW,volume 11))

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This chapter investigated Japanese learners’ processes of English expository writing using multiple data sources including their written texts, videotaped writing behaviors, and stimulated recall protocols. Two groups of Japanese EFL writers (12 experts and 22 novices) were compared both crosssectionally and longitudinally. The study tested the following eight hypotheses formulated as a result of a pilot study (Sasaki, 2000): (1) EFL writing experts write longer texts at greater speed than EFL writing novices; (2) after two semesters of process writing instruction, neither the quantity nor the speed of the novices’ writing improves; (3) the experts spend a longer time before starting to write than the novices; (4) after the instruction, the novices spend a longer time before starting to write; (5) while writing, the experts stop to reread or refine their expressions more often than the novices, whereas the novices stop to make local plans or translate their ideas into L2 more often than the experts; (6) after the instruction, the novices stop to reread more often while making fewer local plans; however, they still have to stop to translate as often as before; (7) the experts tend to plan a detailed overall organization, whereas the novices tend to make a less detailed plan; (8) after the instruction, the novices learn to do global planning, but it is qualitatively different from the experts’ global planning. The obtained results are presented as flowchart diagrams that represent the writing processes of the different groups of EFL learners.

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  1. Although several studies such as Cumming (1989) included writers with professional experience, they were experts in L1 writing rather than L2 writing. I believe that research into the differences between the writing processes of novice and expert L2 writers is necessary to build a comprehensive model of L2 writing processes because experts’ writing ability represent an ultimate goal (and also an ultimate achievement limit) that any L2 learners with similar backgrounds can accomplish (Grabe & Kaplan, 1996).

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  2. Researchers in the field of L1 Japanese writing have also found that it was difficult to collect think-aloud data. For example, Uchida (1989) reported that only two out of ten potential participants produced analyzable think-aloud data in a study investigating children’s revising processes in L1 Japanese (see also Uchida, 1986 for discussion of this issue).

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  3. If these two prompts had been alternated with half of the eight students before and after the instruction (i.e., half of them receiving Prompt 1 before the instruction and Prompt 2 after the instruction with the other half receiving Prompt 2 before the instruction and Prompt 1 after the instruction), I could have avoided possible topic effects on the students’ composition scores and their use of writing strategies. However, if I had alternated the prompts for the novice I group, I would also have had to alternate the prompts for the expert group for a fairer comparison. In such a case, I would have had to consider the possible effects of these two different topics on the participants’ use of writing strategies, especially when the experts’ writing strategies were compared with those of the novices for one composition written on only one occasion. Previous studies (e.g., Carter, 1990; Cumming, 1989; Flower, Schriver, Carey, Haas, & Hayes, 1992) suggest that writers may change their writing strategy use according to different topics. Thus, I decided not to alternate the prompts for the novices. On the other hand, I used similar but different prompts for novices I and II because I was afraid that maturation effects caused by giving the same prompt before and after the instruction (e.g., the novices might have thought about the topic over the two semesters, and thus produced much better quality compositions than they might have if they had not written for the same prompt before the instruction, or they would not plan for the second time because they had already thought about the issue for the first time) might be stronger than possible topic effects (especially when Prompts 1 to 3 were intended to induce very similar argumentative writing, see Sasaki, 2000; Sasaki & Hirose, 1996). I had to make this compromise that might have introduced topic effects for the novices I and II comparison because I wanted to compare the experts and novices on the most equal basis possible while still comparing the same novices before and after the instruction. In other words, I wanted to incorporate into a single study both a cross-sectional design and a longitudinal design using the same participants. This was a real dilemma. But I concluded that topic effects, if they existed at all, would be larger for the expert-novice (inter-group) comparison rather than for the novices I and II (intra-group) comparison. Of course, however, I was aware of the fact that comparing novices I and II could be problematic because of possible topic effects (see the Results and Discussion Section).

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  4. Anzai and Uchida (1981) used pauses longer than two seconds instead of three. Longer pauses were used in the present study because it was concluded that three seconds were the shortest possible pauses that could be handled based on the pilot study results.

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  5. These examples were identified by Tannenbaum, Rosenfeld, and Breyer (1996) as writing tasks that might be required in the field of English for international communication.

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Sasaki, M. (2002). Building An Empirically-Based Model of Efl Learners’ Writing Processes. In: Ransdell, S., Barbier, ML. (eds) New Directions for Research in L2 Writing. Studies in Writing, vol 11. Springer, Dordrecht. https://doi.org/10.1007/978-94-010-0363-6_3

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